2010年10月19日星期二

生大病

咳嗽 头疼 发烧

这些病都找上门来 吃了药就很爱睡

考试后天又要到了 书才看了一点点 死了啦

我很想考好成绩 不过又没有心情读书

现在感觉很累~



无言。。。。。。

1 条评论:

匿名 说...

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